Photosynthesis: Revision history

3 December 2009

• curprev 21:1121:11, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,092 bytes −17‎ should be careful not to give the impression that the CO2 and water linked in the same step.
• curprev 21:0021:00, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,109 bytes +73‎ add phrase
• curprev 20:5620:56, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 10,037 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 20:5420:54, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,036 bytes +79‎ Reworking the lede pgraph, adding a little more detail, and converting passive voice to active for more lively reading and eimination of weak verbs
• curprev 12:2712:27, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 9,730 bytes −227‎ the first paragraph needs to be gereal if this articles goal is to encompass all version of photsynthsesis. Chlorophyll is only one of the pigment that are used
• curprev 02:0302:03, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,958 bytes +1‎ Another nice image. Moved it to the right so text would not look so chopped up as it did with it on the left.
• curprev 01:5901:59, 3 December 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 9,957 bytes 0‎ Nice image now. Reduced size a little bit and it is still quit legible.

2 December 2009

• curprev 23:0023:00, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 9,957 bytes +9,957‎ →‎Overview: add additional illustration; need to edit text to coordinate
• curprev 20:5120:51, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 9,801 bytes −1‎ →‎Overview: another redo of illustration
• curprev 19:2919:29, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Peter Schmitt‎ 9,802 bytes −1,578‎ Lede: better begin with a definition and a brief explanation
• curprev 07:2007:20, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,030 bytes 0‎ →‎Overview
• curprev 07:1807:18, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,030 bytes +1‎ →‎Overview
• curprev 00:1100:11, 2 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,029 bytes −1,351‎ →‎Overview: try to trim redundancy and improve flow

1 December 2009

• curprev 23:4123:41, 1 December 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 10,301 bytes −41‎ break up the initial long sentence

30 November 2009

• curprev 23:1423:14, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,342 bytes 0‎ To be consistent with the other names
• curprev 23:0623:06, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,342 bytes +134‎ No edit summary
• curprev 22:0422:04, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,299 bytes 0‎ →‎Overview: another redo of illustration;
• curprev 18:0218:02, 30 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,299 bytes +91‎ →‎Overview: redo image per suggestion by Milton

29 November 2009

• curprev 22:3622:36, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,296 bytes +88‎ →‎Overview: update image
• curprev 20:4620:46, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 10,296 bytes +88‎ →‎Overview: add image-simplified overview of photosynthesis
• curprev 18:3518:35, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 10,208 bytes −1,172‎ →‎Overview: Shortened this reference. See Talk page and discussion in "Article Policy" section of the forums.
• curprev 18:2718:27, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,569 bytes +189‎ Shortened reference 7. See Talk page and discussion of "Excessive annotations" in "Article Policy" section of forums.
• curprev 18:0618:06, 29 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,784 bytes +404‎ Changed blockquote margins a bit to get entire quote on one line.

28 November 2009

• curprev 14:4414:44, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,785 bytes −231‎ Combined two identical references, by Vermass, into one multiple form citation.
• curprev 14:3514:35, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 12,016 bytes +425‎ elaborating slightly on lede paragraph for a more comprehensive, but concise, introduction of the topic
• curprev 13:4413:44, 28 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 11,591 bytes +211‎ attribution ref for lede sentence

27 November 2009

• curprev 19:4219:42, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 11,380 bytes −2,448‎ Fixed a spelling error of mine
• curprev 17:1617:16, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,379 bytes −4‎ A final copy edit of references
• curprev 17:1417:14, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,378 bytes −5‎ A great many small copy edits to establish some consistency in naming authors and use of commas and italics. Using the {{cite book}} and {{cite article}} templates would provide consistency.
• curprev 15:2215:22, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,360 bytes −18‎ Minor copy edit to remove unneeded usage of ''' which served no purpose
• curprev 15:1715:17, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,378 bytes −16‎ Removed "(hbks)" and "(comp)" which do not convey any needed content
• curprev 15:1315:13, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,394 bytes +11‎ A few minor copy edits to remove bullets which are not required.
• curprev 15:0215:02, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,392 bytes +9‎ Replaced broken external link with one that works.
• curprev 11:4811:48, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,383 bytes −6‎ →‎Overview: Brackets around the word "Oxygen" are not really necessary.
• curprev 11:4411:44, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ 11,385 bytes −4‎ Minor revision of block quote margins to get the quote to fit on one 1 line
• curprev 11:3611:36, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,383 bytes −6‎ Telling readers that the book is a paperback is not an essential piece of information.
• curprev 11:3311:33, 27 November 2009‎ imported>Milton Beychok‎ m 11,389 bytes −2,439‎ "Preliminarily, the reader might refer to the following:" is an incomplete sentence. and is not required.
• curprev 10:0510:05, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ m 11,454 bytes +3‎ fix my fix
• curprev 09:5909:59, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ m 11,451 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 09:5909:59, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 11,450 bytes −180‎ this is really something that everyone agrees to, no attribution is really needed
• curprev 09:5409:54, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ m 11,630 bytes −2,198‎ lower case -> Upper case
• curprev 09:3809:38, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 11,630 bytes −2,198‎ lets avoid the sales pitch
• curprev 09:2509:25, 27 November 2009‎ imported>D. Matt Innis‎ 13,828 bytes +13,828‎ clean up reference section

26 November 2009

• curprev 22:1622:16, 26 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 14,449 bytes +1,753‎ →‎Overview: add annotated reference
• curprev 17:5617:56, 26 November 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 12,878 bytes +182‎ developing lede

27 May 2009

• curprev 21:2021:20, 27 May 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 12,696 bytes +27‎ →‎Overview

11 May 2009

• curprev 20:4520:45, 11 May 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 12,669 bytes +1‎ No edit summary
• curprev 20:3220:32, 11 May 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ 12,668 bytes +956‎ →‎Overview: adding content
• curprev 18:3918:39, 11 May 2009‎ imported>Anthony.Sebastian‎ m 11,712 bytes −7‎ No edit summary

27 February 2009

• curprev 00:2200:22, 27 February 2009‎ imported>Chris Day‎ 11,719 bytes +1‎ →‎Overview: triose can nter glycolysis directly too so its not all exported or used a a building block.